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These are quotations of my own language that were deleted before publication.

1. "By the late 1920s, she seems also to be aware of the erotic dimension of this looking back and forth... But when she came to relate to other men as possible suitors, they, too, noticed her propensity to model, to primp and to think of herself in terms of her own impression."

 
 
2. "And she [Nora] would also continue to taunt Lucia trying to drive a wedge between her children and Joyce. These, at least, were Helen Fleischman Joyce's memories of the dynamic between the Joyce children and their mother during these years."